Monday, March 5, 2012

Character Description

I’ll do it myself
Authors Note: This piece is a character description piece using figurative language to describe better. 
Adam from the book heroes don't run is a very independent character. He is a tall boy with eyes as blue as the pure water of the Caribbean, brown hair, and a muscular frame as sturdy as a rock. When he enters the war he is only seventeen, yet appears much older. Besides age he is a lot like the character from where the red fern grows not physically, but mentally, and is motivated by a lot of the same things.

The character from where the red fern grows wants dogs, but his parents won’t do it so he takes things into his own hands with the assistance of his grandfather. Billy wants dogs which isn’t the same as war, but he deals with it the same, he goes to his grandfather and does things on his own. They both have wills of fire that never give up and never stop. Adam wants different things, but the two books are very similar.

2 comments:

  1. I think that you should underline your title, and change up the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph because it doesn't make any sense.

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  2. Somethings to look over is the transitions and some grammar for example you said (Adam only wants a different things). If you make the changes it will be good.

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