A.J Wiesman 2/22/12
Dude you need to Think

Authors note: This creative essay is to show cause and effect in the point of view of a different character from a different story

Dear Cole, this is Ty Lewis writing to you about the effects you are casing on yourself because of the action you take without thinking. When you beat the crap out of that kid you weren’t thinking and you know it. If you were thinking of the effects that would have on your life you might have just walked away and let it go. In a way though your punishment affected you life in a good way.

The major cause was that you were dumb enough to beat the kid to a pulp so badly you permanently crippled him. The effect from that was you had to go to the island for a long time to fend for food and water. This made you go mad and you tried to swim off the island just to be carried back in by the current.

This all could have all been avoiding if you thought about the stuff you do and the possible effect I think you would be a lot better of a person and people would think a lot better of you. You seem like you don’t care at all, but you have to admit that you would wish people would stop calling you criminal or a bum. The island changed you so in the end you got lucky that the effect affected you in a good way.